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A smile I will never see again
A laugh I will never hear again
An embrace I will never feel again
The love you showed me will never be seen again

The memories I have will never be lost
Everything you told me never be forgotten
The only memento I have will never be left behind
©2004-2009 ~demonic-griffon
:icondemonic-griffon:

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this is in memory of my grandma. she ment alot 2 me & did alot 4 me. i normally don't write but i figured this was a good way 2 show how much i'll miss her.

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:iconsilent-tearz:
Nice kid. As your first, and probably your last poem, I must fav. Plus it's actually good poem. great job kid.
:iconemotional-suicide:
great work man...........srry that ya lost her.....
:iconsablesolitude:
this is awesomeness, kid (stealing tez's nickname for ya). It's so heartfelt. Great job! It's very obvious from this how much you love her and will miss her. For your first poem, this is awesome because it's so real. It's sincere. Ok, i'm going to leave now before I have an insanely long comment.

Au Revoir, and great job, again.

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Fenda il mio polso e denominilo amore
:icondemonic-griffon:
thnx & yeah i will miss her so
:icondemonic-griffon:
lol thnx it is my 1st but maybe not my last, but 4 awhile it will b b/c i don't write much. as u know.
:iconsilent-tearz:
yea tru....tru well whenever your're up for another 1, holla at ur boi

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